The burden of the wilderness of the sea, and the grievous vision declared to the speaker

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Entry: The burden of the wilderness of the sea, and the grievous vision declared to the speaker (event-isa-21-the-burden-of-the-wilderness-of-the-sea)
Address: https://bibliadatum.org/en/wiki/event/isa-21-the-burden-of-the-wilderness-of-the-sea
Current wording: Isaiah 21:1–10: the heading reads, “The burden of the wilderness of the sea.” The text goes on, “As whirlwinds in the South sweep through, it comes from the wilderness, from an awesome land.” The speaker (“I”) says, “A grievous vision is declared to me. The treacherous man deals treacherously, and the destroyer destroys. Go up, Elam; attack! I have stopped all of Media’s sighing. Therefore my thighs are filled with anguish. Pains have seized me, like the pains of a woman in labor. I am in so much pain that I can’t hear. I am so dismayed that I can’t see. My heart flutters. Horror has frightened me. The twilight that I desired has been turned into trembling for me. They prepare the table. They set the watch. They eat. They drink. Rise up, you princes, oil the shield! For the Lord said to me, ‘Go, set a watchman. Let him declare what he sees. When he sees a troop, horsemen in pairs, a troop of donkeys, a troop of camels, he shall listen diligently with great attentiveness.’ He cried like a lion: ‘Lord, I stand continually on the watchtower in the daytime, and every night I stay at my post. Behold, here comes a troop of men, horsemen in pairs.’ He answered, ‘Fallen, fallen is Babylon; and all the engraved images of her gods are broken to the ground. You are my threshing, and the grain of my floor!’ That which I have heard from the LORD of Armies, the God of Israel, I have declared to you.” Neither edition names who answers at 21:9. The Korean Revised Version names 적병, the enemy troops, at 21:1 (적병이 광야에서, 두려운 땅에서 남방 회리바람 같이 몰려 왔도다), where WEB reads “it comes”. At 21:2 it has the Lord speak (주께서 가라사대) and reads 엘람이여 올라가고 메대여 에워싸라 그의 모든 탄식을 내가 그치게 하였노라, calling on Media to besiege, where WEB reads “Go up, Elam; attack! I have stopped all of Media’s sighing.” At 21:8 it names the watchman (파숫군이 사자 같이 부르짖기를), where WEB reads “He cried like a lion”; and it closes the answer at 21:9 with 하시도다, before 21:10 (너 나의 타작한 것이여 나의 마당의 곡식이여), where WEB closes the answer after “the grain of my floor!”
Cited evidence: ISA 21:1–10, engwebp
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